2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；可适当增加从句的使用；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，高级词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误；

It was generally consideration that if you break your all of road of retreat,you will try your best to success.Thus,people desiring for being successful doesn't need too many alternation to choice to give up. However,it's important for us to make some different decisions including giving the opportunity up to deal with different conditions.In fact,a number of problems that we don't have ability to solve can handicap our way to get our target,only by passing through it can we contunue going forward,instead of putting all your energy on it.Consequently,it's unwise to put all your eggs in one basket. In conclusion,not only the passion for facing the diffculties do we need,but also the wisdom analysising the question.