2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；可适当增加从句的使用；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些高级词汇；

It was general consideration that if you break all your of road of retreat,you will try your best to success.Thus,people desiring for being successful shouldn't make too many alternations to choice to give up. However,it's important for us to make some different decisions including giving the opportunity up to deal with different conditions.In fact,a number of problems that we don't have ability to solve can impede our way to get our target,only by passing through it can we continue going forward,instead of putting all your energy on it.Consequently,it's unwise to put all your eggs in one basket. In conclusion,not only the passion for facing the diffculties do we need,but also the wisdom analysising the question.