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tour to Beijing If my foreign friend is coming to visit China,I would like to take him to see Beijing.There are my thoughs in the follow. Beijing is known as Chinese capital.It has a high level in economic and covenient traffic.In addition,there are many places of interst in the city.Especially the Great Wall,which is represent for Chinese history.Also,The National Palace Museum,is sheer wide.And we can see many books over many years.If we want to enjoy happy environment, we can go the Hutong,which is crowed.what is more,it is busy. In a word,it is worth to coming to visit Beijing. That are all my resons.