在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意;
tour to Beijing If my foreign friend is coming to visit China,I would like to take him to see Beijing.There are my thoughs in the follow. Beijing is known for the capital of China.It has a high level in economic and convenient traffic.In addition,there are many places of interst in the city.Especially the Great Wall,which i representing for Chinese history.Also,The National Palace Museum,is sheer wide.And we can see many books over many years.If we want to enjoy happy environment, we can go the Hutong,which is crowd.what is more,it is busy. In a word,it is worth coming to visit Beijing. These are all my reasons.