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Tour to Beijing If my foreign friend is coming to visit China,I would like to take him to see Beijing.There are my thoughts in the follow. Beijing is known for the capital of China.It has a high level in economic and convenient traffic.In addition,there are many places of interest in the city.Especially the Great Wall,which i representing for Chinese history.Also,The National Palace Museum,is sheer wide.And we can see many books over many years.If we want to enjoy happy environment, we can go the Hutong,which is very crowd.What is more,it is busy. In a word,it is worth coming to visit Beijing. That is all my reasons.