小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend . her name is marry .she have long hair and big eyes .she is a independent girl ,i feeling she is beautiful . she have a dog in the home and the mom or dad.There are so friendly.I really like they. marry very like to eat KFC and M .It's I lovin it.