简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;过渡词和衔接词不饱和,文章行文较为流畅;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;
I have a good friend named SANDY.She was borned in 1990 in China and she have the blue eyes. She is good at painting.There are four people in her family.She likes swimming and basketball,but she is not good at that.She is a kindlly girl and loves everything in her life.