2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；建议适当增加些复杂句的使用；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；

Nowadays,different people hold different views about whether or not one should expect a reward when doing a good deed.Some people think that a good deed should be given a certain reward.They say it is agreeable with the rule of fairness.Also,rewards can stimulate people's enthusiasm to do good deeds. However,there are many others who take Leifeng as a good model and be always ready to help others without expecting any reward.Everyone may be in trouble.Only if you help others unselfishly,you can get Other's help when you need it.Besides,they maintain that one can enjoy happiness in doing good deeds,they think,which is the best return. Weighing up these two arguments,I prefer the second one.First,being happy to help others is one of Chinese people's traditional virtues.Second,this virtue is of more significance for the creation of a harmonious society.To conclude,it is every citizen's responsibility to do good deeds without expecting any reward.