2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

文章组织结构良好；从句使用不错，但需加强复杂句的使用；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误；

Drawing a conlcution before you think it over is a smart behavior. Recently,Zakberge who is the one of creator of FaceBook anounceed that he would donated 99% of his vaule to help to make kids be able to live a beter life.There is no doubt that it will be benefical to children of all world.On the contary A comment that Zakberge do this is to avoid playing duty are aceepted by numerous people. I cannot belive it !