可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用高级词汇;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;
The reasons why I insist on the viewpoint that we should never directly and irresponsibly come to conclusions only by listening or seeing mainly lie in the following two aspects. To begin with,it is a invariable law to every existence in the world that nothing will stay still even for just one second.So are the things happening around us. What we see or listen may be just some particular period of the development of things,which proves unstable and changeable. In addition,the perspectives we conclude just through seeing or listening are usually one-sided. Drawing conclusions rashly is not objective enough to make our statements persuasive. To sum up,it is unwise for us to define any thing as what we assume or imagine at first sight.Only by our serious thinking and accurate analyzing can we come up with more rational and reasonable conclusions.
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