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Once we turn on the TV, we inevitably encounter advertising. Advertisements occupy a considerable proportion in our daily life. Some people think it brings as benefits, but others disapprove of it. I’m sure that advertisements are of great help for people getting the better life. First of all, with the help of advertisements, it will be more convenient that we buy things. Maybe we can choose our favorite goods at the same time eating popcorn and drinking Coca-cola. We needn’t step out of the door and pick goods in lots of stores. Advertisements make it easier. What’s more, it will lead up to our money-saving. We can compare the products on TV advertisements and finally find the cheapest one and buy it. For that, we can be careful with money and our money can be maximum utilization. Last but not least, advertisements can also promote economy in the market-oriented economy. It will expand brand awareness for producers. It will improve the chance that people buy this kind of goods. To sum up, advertising on TV plays a vital role in our daily life. It changes our life. Nevertheless we need to learn how to distinguish between the advertisements. That makes our life better.
