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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分66.0分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;简单句稍微有点多,可适当增加从句使用;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误;

用户练习作文:

Don't judge people by their appearence The past several years have witness a phenomenon that a variety of abilities are sheer nonsense.Odd and funny,judging peoplke by their appearance can be seen and heard everywhere in our country, On the one hand,superficially,it seems to be somewhat reasonable,we can be more easier to get a ideal job if we own to have great appearence.But when weighting in the mind,we find there is an apperent tendency underlying this phenomenon.On the other hand,good appearance fades while abilities can be improved over time. To sum up,it is unwise to to judge a person by their appearance.we should remenber the old saying"abilities is the best policy".

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