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2001年1月英语六级作文真题:面试成功的因素

发布时间:2013-05-14 19:08浏览次数:2297
要求:

Directions:  For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 

1. 面试在求职过程中的作用  

2. 取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……   

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;全文结构较为严谨;

用户练习作文:

How to succeed in a job interview. Succeed in a job interview is the first step to obtain a job,sometimes maybe a detail will make people lose a good chance,there are some factors which influent the consequence or interview.The fallowing will list the most important factors in job interview. To begin with,interviewee must pay attention to their appearances.As we knew,the first impression is very important,especially when we face the employer.And interviewee should do their best to make a good manner in interview.Secondly,confidence is also a necessary factor.Don't too nervous or too timid,just be courteous,and simile,the skill is useful in formal occasions.Last but not least,with Rich knowledge reserves is the key factor to succeed no matter in interview or real life.It needs us to get a professional knowledge and skill. In short,in order to get a satisfactory job,interviewee should make full preperation.In this way,you can stand out among others interviewee

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