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The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication John D.Rockefeller as oil baron was said that if the ability of interpersonal communication like suger or coffee as a commodity,I will pay for this ability with the price of the precious than anything under the sun.Which shows that importance of communication. Communication as an important skill of interpersonal communication,which widely apply to daily life,it also have great effect on our life,such as interpersonal conflicts. As we all know,in most cases interpersonal conflicts are root in the communication between people,if we are in truble when communicate,we can't tell others what's the true thought from our heart so that caused misunderstood or made a fool of ourselves.Only communicate with others accurately and timely can we build the good interpersonal relationships,which is firm and long.What's more,we can succeed. In modern society,we will loss much chance where somebody is good at communication.At the same time,it caused we can't cooperate with others.Everybody are not live in islet,only keep good cooperate with others can we earn resource that we need and acquire succeed.You konw,all the success are good at interpersonal communication and value it.
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