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The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication John D.Rockefeller as oil baron was said that if the ability of interpersonal communication like suger or coffee as a commodity,I will pay for this ability with the price of the precious than anything under the sun.Which shows the importance of communication. Communication as an important skill of interpersonal communication,which widely applies to daily life,it also has great effects on our life,such as interpersonal conflicts. It is universally acknowledged that in most cases interpersonal conflicts are root in the communication between people,if we are in trouble when communication,we can't tell others what was the true thought from our heart so that caused misunderstood or made a fool of ourselves.Only communicate with others accurately and timely can we build the good interpersonal relationships,which is firm and long.What's more,we can succeed. In modern society,we will loss much chance where somebody is good at communication.At the same time,it caused we can't cooperate with others.Everybody are not live in islet,only keep good cooperate with others can we earn resource that we need and acquire succeed.You konw,all the success are good at interpersonal communication and value it.
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