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假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
注意： 词数不少于60.
提示词： 游乐园 amusement park
垃圾箱 bin
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Our class decide to have a spring outing.Some students want to go to the amusement park,but some want to boat in the river,anther students want to climb the mountain,all students put up with their ideas.After a long disscussion,we decide to climb the mountain.On the road to the mountain,there are many green trees and beautiful flowers.To our surprises,we find much little on the mountian.So we start to clean the little.And we put the little to two kinds that are cycle and not cycle,finally we put them into the cycling bin. We all have a very unforgetable day.
