2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些高级词汇；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；

As can be seen from the picture,people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see.Apparently,the purpose of the picture is to emphsiza the importance of proper use of cell phones. This is a thought-provoking picture.To start with it is known to all that cell phone can change our life to more convenient.Neverneless,our life will changed boring when we're overusing it .To make things worse,it will made us in dangerous.Then, we are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see is a case in point.When we in that case,cell phones will distracted our attention.Finally,because overusing it will demaged our eyes .This will lead to down the vision. Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration,the things we need.But we should and could overusing it .