2007年考研英语作文真题:面对困难时候的想法

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When the issue of lacking honesty arouses wide public concern from the public,can we still stand there,hesitating for what occurs?As the picture dictation,there was a older who had dropped into the road .However without anyone were willingto help the man but a youngster.It was surprise us that the youngster caring a contact,writing I dropped myself without connecting with others,asked the older make a promise first. But my own worry today is that less of the issue of the overwhelming problem of the older had dropped in but it is the slightly of the more lurious the agency of deli cine in the honesty.Several factors could weigh in this problem,yet, suspended at the top of the list are the following two aspects.To begin with ,the older,a victim,always want to get his money for medical expenses.What is more , externally,as a great man ,who got accused when he has given a warm-hearted hand,are frustrated by what the victims do,so that he didn't help them. take into account all analyses mentioned above,Iam convinced that if all of us with more honesty, our,most of us are desirable to give their hands to help the victims.Only when building up our honesty between persons,can we our society become more harmonious.