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2007年考研英语作文真题:面对困难时候的想法

发布时间:2013-05-20 21:59浏览次数:2180
要求:
题目:面对困难时候的想法(题目自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay
要求
1.describe the drawing briefly
2.explain its intended meaning
3.support your view with an example/ examples

字数:200满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
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拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;

用户练习作文:

When the issue of lacking honesty arouses wide public concern from the public,can we still stand there,hesitating for what occurs?As the picture dictation,there was an older who had dropped into the road.However without anyone was willing to help the man but a youngster.It was surprise us that the youngster taking a contract,writing I dropped myself without connecting with others,asked the older make a promise first. But my worry today is that less of the issue of the overwhelming problem of the older had dropped in but it is the slightly of the more luxurious the agency of deli cine in the honesty.Several factors could weigh in this problem,yet, suspended at the top of the list are the following two aspects.To begin with,the older,a victim,always want to get his money for medical expenses.What is more, externally,as a great man ,who got accused when he has given a warm-hearted hand,was frustrated by what the victims do,so that he didn't help them. take into account all analyses mentioned above,Iam convinced that if all of us with more honesty, our,most of us are desirable to give their hands to help the victims.Only when building up our honesty between persons,can we our society become more harmonious.

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