字数:200满分:100分
单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;
From this picture,we can find a strange phenomenon that an old man needs the help from the strangers when he falls down on the street.There are so many passers hesitating if should go and help him.Only a man will go and help the old man.Another man takes a contract that writes,“You must guarantee a fact that falls down by yourself and sign your name",than I will help you.What's worse,a man passes quickly just like doesn't see what have happened. As we can see from the picture,why is it that people become so cold?The more important problem is that people's honesty has gone.The reasons for that are complex.Firstly,with the develop of social,people are becoming selfishly.Secondly,more and more news report that many people were accused to strike old men,but the fact is that they didn't made it and just helped the injured men. People loses honest with each other,the social becomes cold.Honesty is gold,honesty means speaking the truth.He who lies and cheats is dishonest.Honesty is good virtue.If you are honest all the time,you'll be trusted and respected by others.And the world would be more warming and beautiful.