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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40876
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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文中词汇表达用的较灵活,同时能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;

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Recently,a saying that "Dream as big as your desire,but don't forget to wake yourself from it with some consistent effective actions"has been discussed fiercely.From my perpective,the implied meaning of the sentence is that hardly can we achieve our dream without the practice of persistence and courage. From my point of view,a multitude of examples can be found to illustrate this fact.We all have the same experience that we pursued our dream when we are kids,but the dream still is away from us now.For example,I want to be a doctor in the future,but I just regard it as my dream without effort for the simple reason that it requires the sipirit of persistence and courage.So I can't achieve success because I forget to wake myself from the dream with some consistent effective actions.In addition,the effective actions is of utmost important for us to pursue our dream.A host of people,youngsters particular,fail to sufficiently use time which lead to their failure.We can have a plan to stay away from various temptation in the life,so we can enhance our effection to pursue my dream. From what we have discussed above,we can safely come to the conclusion that enough actions is significance for us to achieve success.Only by practice effectively,can we make the future fruitfully and meaningfully.

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