2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

文章衔接手法恰当；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；

Nowdays,cell phones are playing am important role in our lifes that many people always use it in everytime.Everything are two sides,on one side,cell phones make our life more convenient and efficient。On the other side,it will makes people jump into it ,it is so dangerous that people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones.When you make us of cell phones improperly,only done harm of you. In my opinion,cell phones should be used in a suitable time.We can surf the Interent to look out the infortmation and shopping.But when we are outside,we should keep the cell phone in bag which can concentrate on your roads that are full of beautiful flowevers.