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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11310
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;文中衔接词丰富;

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Nowadays,cell phones are playing am important role in our life that many people always use it in every time.Everything has two sides,on one side,cell phones make our life more convenient and efficient.On the other side,it will make people jump into it,it is so dangerous that people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones.When you make use of cell phones improperly,only done harm of you. In my opinion,cell phones should be used in a suitable time.We can surf the Interent to look out the information and go shopping.Nonetheless when we are outside,we should keep the cell phone in bag which can concentrate on your roads that are full of beautiful flowers.

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