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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中词汇表达比较丰富，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文中从句使用不丰富，要注意个别句子错误；
Sun ZhongShan former residence was located on the Cuiheng village in the Zhongshan City ,in which our brilliant people Sun ZhongShan was born .Sun Zhongshan is the first president of Nationalist party ,who ended chinese fuedalism and started the democratic system .Sun Zhonshan is important and great people ,So It's a historic significant locality for us and also is a place show the south culture . There is a typical south residence , they keep the old aged furniture and unfold the south life habbit and diet .And this place shows the traditional south culture of marrier etd . When a foreign people visit a city ,they will comprehend the local culture firstly and communicate with thee local people .
