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作者词汇表达比较灵活多变，尤其是高级词汇使用较恰当；作者句法知识扎实，但文中从句数量稍显不足；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；
Our tourism business has a flouring time that it occupies considerable proportion in GDP. It brings benefits to the dwellers of the city, but, on the other side, it also bring about disaster to our environment. In the first place, when traveler flock to the tourism attraction, their vehicles will emit exhaust fume. Let alone the voice pollution made by people that will be harmful to the environment. What’s more, in order to make the tourism business prosperous, the government will cut down trees that it will be used as building feature architecture. Last but not least, some people lacking environment awareness will be littering. Sometimes the cute animals will eat it and get sick. To some degree, that kind of impolite way will pollute the environment. To sum up, that we promote tourism business at the cost of environment is a wrong choice beyond doubt. So we need to find a balance between tourism business development and environmental protection.
