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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9026
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;全文结构较为严谨;

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How to succeed in a job interview. Succeeding in a job interview is the first step to obtain a job,sometimes maybe a detail will make people lose a good chance,there are some factors which influent the consequence or interview.The fallowing will list the most important factors in job interview. To begin with,interviewee must pay attention to their appearances.As we knew,the first impression is very important,especially when we face the employer.And interviewee should do their best to make a good manner in interview.Secondly,confidence is also a necessary factor.Don't too nervous or too timid,just be courteous,and simile,the skill is useful in formal occasions.Last but not least,with Rich knowledge reserves is the key factor to succeed no matter in interview or real life.It needs us to get a professional knowledge and skill. In short,in order to get a satisfactory job,interviewee should make full preperation.In this way,you can stand out among others interviewee

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