可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用高级词汇;全文结构较为严谨;
When it comes to the topics of certificate,everybody has his own perspective.A host of people has been crazy about various kinds of tests to get certificates for their respective objectives.The majority thinks it is of great necessary to get as more certificates as they can. In no place other than schools,it has been said,is this phenomenon more obvious.There is no denying that certificates can be helpful for the job-hunting in the future.As far as I am concerned,however,certificates do not play an indispensable or crucial role in our school life.First of all,certificates can only certify that you have capacity in some areas,which not mean you can do it well.Furthermore,taking job-hunting as a good instance,recruiters are more likely to appreciate the abilities and characters of the applicants instead of certificates. To sum up,we students should pay more attention to raise our abilities and cultivation of individual characteristics.Only this way,can we have a promising future.