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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8972
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,高级词汇使用稍显不足;

用户练习作文:

Don't judge people by their appearance Although many people acknowledge the old saying that "Never judge people by their appearance",they still fall into the trap of "good appearance"easily. In my opinion,for a person,abilities are far more important than the appearance. Firstly,although good appearance can help make an impression, it is always abilities that really matter. Secondly,people's good appearance is natural, while abilities have to be gained through self-improvement and years of hard work,which speak more of people's true selves. Last but not least, good appearance fades while abilities can be improved over time .Eventuallly, it is abilities that help people succeed,so it is safe to say that abilities will always bring more to life than good appearance. Inconclusion,it is unwise to judge people by their appearance and it is always abilities that count in the long run. As college students, we should spend more efforts developing our abilities.

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