小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

学术词汇比较灵活，还要请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

My good friend Joy is a beautiful girl. She's younger than I, but we're still goods friend. I think there is no age and sex and color between friends. She is my previous colleague at Yufoong factory and now we are living a room to find a new job. Wish us good luck!