小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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Candy is my new teacher. She is beautiful. She has two big eyes and a big mouth, and they are cute. Candy is a humorous teacher who can always bring us happiness. She likes smiling very much so that we all wants to make firnds with her. We like her very much.