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“It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket”is a proverb showing the significance of choices,apparently,it aims to deliver a message that having a plan B seems both necessary and indispensable in our daily life. We are living in a world full of choices,not every one of them is advisable.Thus,having a good choice seems to be more crucial.Taking job-hunting as a good instance,if you were denied by a company,it not means your performance was not good enough.Instead,it can only prove that you were not appropriate for the position in that company.Perhaps,there are more companies desired to recruit some applicants like you.“Always have a plan B”is a wise choice which can decrease the risk of falling into hopefulness states Having a plan B not means you have to use it,sometimes it is better to take a step as boundless as the sea and sky