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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10396
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;

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“It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket”is a proverb showing the significance of choices,apparently,it aims to deliver a message that having a plan B seems both necessary and indispensable in our daily life. We are living in a world full of choices,not every one of them is advisable.Thus,having a good choice seems to be more crucial.Taking job-hunting as a good instance,if you were denied by a company,it not means your performance was not good enough.Instead,it can only prove that you were not appropriate for the position in that company.Perhaps,there are more companies desired to recruit some applicants like you.“Always have a plan B”is a wise choice which can decrease the risk of falling into hopefulness states Having a plan B not means you have to use it,sometimes it is better to take a step as boundless as the sea and sky

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