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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8992
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;

用户练习作文:

When it comes to the topic of appearance,everybody has their own perspective.There has been a heated discussion about whether we should judge a person by their appearance among the public. As far as I am concerned,judging a person by their appearance is not only harmful but also damaging for the personal growth.It cannot help foster in the young the morally sound values and outlook on the world and life,in other words,harmful.Among the adolescents,this phenomenon is more urgent and serious.For example,currently,there is an increasing number of youngster who are crazy about stars,they care nothing but the appearances of stars.This can eventually result in distorted self-value. To sum up,we can safely come to the conclusion that it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance,which cultivation of individual characteristics is more important.

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