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高级词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；
When it comes to the topic of life everybody has his own interpretation,one of the most inspiring idea that I cannot agree with more goes that "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." This proverb does reveal the nature of life. Power,wealth and reputation should not be the ultimate goal in life.Life should be more colorful by spending time on other things which are more meaningful.Actually,history abounds with examples to prove this point.Lei Feng was a young man who made his life full of sunshine by helping strangers without rewards.Although he had a short life,his story remains today. Let me come back to myself,as far as I am concerned,the indispensable part of life which can bring the merry atmosphere is holding a thankful heart.That’s exactly what I’m going to do.
