高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

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Nowadays China is playing a increasingly important role in the international stage and manners are very important in international communication,so it is crucial to improve the qualities of the citizens in our country. However we can see that some people don't behave properly in public places ,such as spitting randomly and the flowers in the park are also picked.What is more,rubbish and plastic bags are thrown in the streets. These behaviors will leave a bad impression on foreign vistors and have bad effects on the reputation of China as a large country with so long a history.I think everyone of us should have good manners and improve our qualities.