语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;能够使用一些不错的从句;文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达,但词汇拼写要更加认真;
At present, the life we lived become more and more quickly, which develop a quickly thinking. But not every decision is right, even often result a bad conclusion.so the question"we made a decision immediatly what we see or listen" is become more and more popular in this society. There are two kings of sides about this question, most of people think that making a decision immediatly without thinking is a bad habitt.because this way often can led fail.so when we have to make a decision immediatly, we just think seconds and make a right choice. But the other people think this is causing by quickly life, so, we have not much time to thinking before we make a choice.
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