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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12896
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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评语:

从句使用很不错,再接再厉;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;

用户练习作文:

It seems to me that the cartoon is sending a message about a couple use computer to chat with their son and try to express their mood which missed the boy very much,they are only access to the internet seeing again. Which reveals now many homes want to communicate with their kids hardly. In my perspective of view, this phenomenon is not normal to parents are unfair.

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