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单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；全文结构较为严谨。
Encouragements can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times.Whenever you feel depressed ,the encouragements from your friends will lift your spirits and make you brave enough to move on. I personally first realize the power of encouragements during the first year in high school.At that time ,I was very bad at English,and got poor scores in the exams .These days ,I felt hopeless and don't believe my ability.When I was at the point of giving up,my friend Lilei found that I was having trouble with studies .He came and encouraged me,he told me that Edison failed for more than 300 times when he tried to invent the electric bulbs,but he never gave up and finally became a world famous inventor.Lilei's words inspired me greatly and I tried even harder and finally made it in the following exam. People often say that a friend in need is a friend indeed.Encouragements from our friends are so powerful that they give our courage to attain our success.
