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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词；
From:hubin@163.com Date:Dec.23.2015 To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com Dear sir or madam: Hi!I knew about the new product of your company that was called as 5670 in the exhibition which was held in New York from Dec.15th to 22rd.I am very interested in it.So please send a price list and instruction to me.Thank you for your cooparation.I hope we can establish business relationship. jackie
