小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Yuan Yuan is my good friend. She is a beautiful girl with big eyes. She has long and black hairs,read mouth and white skin liking snow. She study very hard, then she is a good student. And she like to help others, for example, Yu lost his pencil and Yuan Yuan helped him find it three day ago. I like her.