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Recent years have seen a heated topic on whether college students should employ cleaner.Now,quite a few people think that it can damp down students' burden.They can spend more time in studying.But hiring cleaner,personally,shouldn't be adapted by college students. On the one hand,college students are equal to doing cleaning by themselves.These simplest family chores are taught by their parents when they were young.Therefore,it is a bit shame for university students,who want to ease their burden by hiring a cleaner.Cultivating their independence must throw themselves into exercise. On the other hand,a majority of college students fail to financial independence.They dispose of parents' money to do such things that they should have done by themselves.Hence,paying for the cleaner,they are definitely able to do with their parents' hard-earned money is not justifiable. Taking into account all the relevant factors which are unbefitting for college students to hire a cleaner doing the chores.This will give rise to make a bad impression on others.
