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Now,it is widely recognized that volunteering is a meaningful activity,more and more people are willing to devote themselves to it.Personally,volunteering not only can enrich my experience,but broaden my horizon. Volunteering endows me a number of experiences.The abundance and variety of volunteering are supplied,which is a good opportunity to exercise and improve myself.Say,going to beadhouse can make me more considerate and learn to value the precious time lived with my grandparents.Going to elementary school,I can know about some teaching methods and the way of getting along with children,which can make a difference someday.Moreover,volunteering should popularize among the public. Volunteering usually is a good chance for me to widen horizons.As a volunteer,I can go anywhere as long as I want to.Volunteering relates to every walk of life.Were I a volunteer,I would go to a place that I never knew about.For instance,cultural attractions,natural attractions and historical attractions.All of these can make me learn about the world through a new view. In summary,the significance for volunteering means more than experience.It will broaden outlook and exert a profound influence on personality and life.
