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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5735
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨;

用户练习作文:

Recently, there has been a heated topic about A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. In the matters of social opinions, there is many a reason accounts for it. As for as I'm concerned, I categorised these reasons in the following parts. With the dramatically increasing of world technology, there are more and more messages filled in our life. As a result of this, people is always driven by a playing temptation of using the phone. On account of this, they are always concentrating on the spread news and spend less time sticking to one itself sophisticated thing. Like a coin has two sides, though it can widen people's reading view as well as can help them learn more news with least time. It decreases their attention on focus on one topic. What's more, as we all know, many areas in which need people absorb themselves to one problem.With the present background, it seems impossible. In my view, in order to solve this problem, we can call on people to back on concentrating reading again. Only when they begin to do this, the social can keep its prolifiration of knowledge and technology.

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