2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Locating in the sount of China,my hometown is zhaoqing where is considered as the modle of city’green,because it have 90% place was covered by strees and the citisen have the awarness of protect green facilities.So when my foreign friend come to visit my hometown，i will lead he to climt the tallest hit of Zhaoqing.There are several reasons why i will.do this.First of all, on the top of mountain,we can breathe the fresh air and see the while city slight.Second,climting can let me know that if we want to got some nice things,we should pay some effort and overcome some difficulties,of couse,we also must help earnth other,so it can promote friendship.Firdly,in the process,i will present the double ninth festival.From what bas been discussed,we cn knom it is wonderful that leard my foreign friend to climt the mountain of my hometown.