2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；可适当增加从句的使用；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累高级词汇，拼写错误也要注意；

Locating in the sount of China,my hometown is zhaoqing where is considered as the modle of city’green,because it have 90% place was covered by trees and the citizen have the awarness of to protect the green facilities.So when my foreign friend comes to visit my hometown，I will lead he to climb the highest mountain of Zhaoqing.There are several reasons why I will do this.First of all, on the top of mountain,we can breathe the fresh air and see the while city slight.Second,climbing can let me know that if we want to get some nice things,we should pay some effort and overcome some difficulties,of course,we also must help each other,so it can promote friendship.Firdly,in the process,i will present the double ninth festival.From what bas been discussed,we cn know it is wonderful that lead my foreign friend to climb the mountain of my hometown.