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As we all know , what you see is not always true ,what you hear is also not true . so it is no wisable that you come to conclusin by seeing or listening . In recent years, along with paying attentin to education ,many extracalculations come up like paion class, English , Math and so on . there is a problem how to choice a excellent class , we don't judge it by advicer's say .I think the feasible way is to experience .you can try wheather it is fit yourself . and another example , we also see tv , someone is bad or someone is opposit , a man' s behavior is not completely appear the mind . maybe she is traied . so what you see is not always true , you can judge it through many things .
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