小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have good firend.She is a outgoing girl.She have black and short hari,two black eye and cute ear. She is a clever girl.she like reading book,playing computer game and paly the basketball.we are best firend. one day we go to the prak that playing basketball with happy.Finnay we go home.