请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,对拼写检查也要重视;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词;从句数量过少;
I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. her voice is good. she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading , playing computer games and chessing. she is also nice. she often help us . our classmates like her very much.