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As we all know，nowadays，people are living under various pressures，for instance the education pressure， career pressure，family pressure。The most important thing that whenever and whatever persons suffer pressure is to keep a good mood。 In modern society，that people work hard and spend most of their time in job only in order to live better and more comfortable。But in fact，people are tired and have no time to have amusement。They spend less time singing，dancing，traveling，playing with friends ...to relax themselves。As a result，they often lose temper easily and have bad influence intheir family，what's worse，they will get along bad with others。 There are several methods to keep a good mood。Persons can read books in their spare time or communicate with families and closed friends or take a trip with families and friends in holidays，meanwhile，they can only stay home to sleep ，watch TV and so on。These all above can be useful to keep a good mood，then they can have high efficiency。 So it is extremely important for persons to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances。
