题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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On Maintaining Trust As the proverb depicts,trust is built with years,nevertheless,it is more easily destroyed.It is acknowledged that trust is indispensible when people are getting along with others.It may be indifferent person to person without trust.As a result,It is essential to maintain trust. The reasons are as following.First and foremost,trust is fragile.It may be a word that can give rise to unexpected consequence.When talking about frie;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;