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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40876
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分70.5分
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文中一些高级词汇的使用比较灵活,但请注意单词拼写的检查;

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Some people always say:I only believe what i saw and heard which is on a basis of truth.However,in adverse,it's a controversial idea that come up with the result simply according to the superficial fact.Eyes and ears are lied somehow. From my point of view,it's much wiser to have a conclusion after understand the issue throughtly.For instance,stock market,where filled up with various informations about stocks,and if normal people buy or drop their stock according to those informations spread from reliable "friends" rather than acurate anaysis, it would be a tradgic consequence. On the other hand, jumping to conclusion to a person by listening what people said about him,sometimes it makes troubles as well.

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